Fantasy Writer

Alden
Burgess

Writing stories where the magic is easy. It's the people who are complicated.

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ExSpelled
Alden Burgess

Adult Urban Fantasy

Currently querying

ExSpelled

When you accidentally kill the chosen one, you're not the most popular guy in town.

Lanford Grier is very good at not having a plan. It's kept him out of trouble, mostly, ever since Merewood Institute of Wizardry expelled him for a ritual that went horribly wrong. Now he drives drunk mages home at 2 am. But when he stumbles upon a woman dying from a poison unseen in decades, he takes her to the only place that can save her — and the only place he swore he'd never go back.

Returning to Merewood pulls Lanford straight into a conspiracy — and the disappearance of his father, the Institute's foremost expert on the Gods of Old. His sole allies are the misfits who were expelled right alongside him. They're not thrilled to see each other, but they don't have a choice. The Hammer moves in the shadows — and they've been waiting a very long time to finish what they started.

Redemption would be nice, but he'd take survival.

Adult Urban Fantasy ~98K Words Currently Querying

Comp titles: The Tainted Cup by Robert Jackson Bennett · Witch King by Martha Wells · The Raven Scholar by Antonia Hodgson

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Full query package available on request. Manuscript complete. Get in touch →

About Alden

Alden Burgess writes fast-paced, funny fantasy adventures. His debut novel, ExSpelled, follows Lanford Grier as he tries to solve a murder and save his father from an evil sorcerer.

After studying at Maine Media College and spending years in film production, Alden brought a storyteller's instincts to the page with a love of structure, a weakness for a well-timed joke, and the conviction that even magic systems need rules.

Alden is a board member of the Speculative Fiction Writers Association, where he writes the craft column The Engine Room. He lives in Northampton, Massachusetts, with his wife, two kids, and Taco Tuesday, a yellow lab who takes his hiking schedule very seriously.

ExSpelled is currently with beta readers.

Alden Burgess

The Engine Room

Welcome to the Engine Room, where craft can be learned, adjusted, and repaired. Out of sight of the passengers, but essential to keep the story moving forward.

Tell the Reader Once

Before your protagonist faces their biggest challenges, give the reader a clear picture of what they're up against. In the opening of Raiders of the Lost Ark, Indy navigates the temple by avoiding pressure plates, swinging over a crevasse, and stepping carefully across the booby-trapped floor. With each step, we see what happens if he gets it wrong. So when the temple collapses, and the boulder comes, the anxiety is real because the viewer knows what it takes to escape.

What makes the scene work so well is that it's pulling double duty. It establishes the obstacle and the character — that Indy is intelligent, capable, and brave. We didn't need to be told any of that, because we watched it.

For your opening sequence, tell the reader once what your protagonist is walking into, so when they face similar circumstances, the reader knows what they're up against. And how they handle those circumstances will reveal character, all for the better.

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